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Old 18-Nov-2008, 00:47   #1
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If you believe the media

We all fall faster to the abyss
A world gone mad with deprivation
Maybe its time for an absolution
We gave our freedom away to fear
Spent our lives looking up bullshit on wikipedia
The answers there in right in your face
Humanities fallen from grace
When the fools hold office
And the king is blind
The boatman waits with a broadening smile
Will you pay your coin and march to hell
Or make your stand and remember
Only sheep walk to the slaughter
You think this will end in a world-wide utopia
Open your eyes and take in the air
This is how civilisations end my dear
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 02:58   #2
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 10:00   #3
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Swap out the "are" and "r" for "our" and I'll think about it.
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 10:24   #4
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 10:43   #5
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Quite good matey, only bit I don't think is right is the "Humanities fallen from grace" line. I don't believe humanity has ever been in a position to call grace
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 12:19   #6
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He may be referring to the humanities though: geography, history, social sciences...which aren't as popular as they used to be. Otherwise it would be "humanity's"
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 14:45   #7
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 15:06   #8
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Oh I've got loads more to throw at him...biding my time I am.
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 15:55   #9
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 17:03   #10
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We all fall faster to the abyss
A world gone mad with deprivation
Maybe it's time for an absolution
We gave our freedom away to fear
Spent our lives looking up bullshit on wikipedia
The answer's there in right in your face
Humanitiey's fallen from grace
When the fools hold office
And the king is blind
The boatman waits with a broadening smile
Will you pay your coin and march to hell
Or make your stand and remember
Only sheep walk to the slaughter
You think this will end in a world-wide utopia
Open your eyes and take in the air
This is how civilisations end my dear

OK, there wasn't exactly loads and that "right in your face" line I wasn't clear whether you were referring to multiple answers or just the one answer or whether you meant "therein" or whether the "in" was superfluous.
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Old 18-Nov-2008, 17:08   #11
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He's a frustrated school teacher. Note the red pen!
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